Questions, Concerns, or Angry Discertations

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7 Responses to Questions, Concerns, or Angry Discertations

  1. Nathan Riches says:

    Just a quick little suggestion, the plural of drag is dragged, not drug, as in “she dragged her hand across the girl’s erect nipple”. There are a few other mistakes you make from time to time (like forgetting which girl is doing what :P ) but thats the most prevalent one and it bugs me. Not that I’m saying your stories arent great cos they are.

  2. Exos says:

    Hey Nathan, not plural but past tense :D

    Otherwise yeah, that’s pretty much all there is to complain about in ebo’s writing. The writing is so good, I can easily see you (ebo) writing for movies or series!

  3. Cassie says:

    I was talking with a friend about your stories, ans she brought up a glaring anachronism that i never thought about.
    Being that Natty is a Russian born sex slave from the early 60′s , even at 12, there is nearly a 100% chance that she would smoke.

    How do you explain this? Are there no cigarettes in the place of locked doors? Did she forget that she was a smoker in life? Or does she smoke in the place of locked doors, but it just hasn’t been mentioned in the story so far?

    I would love it if you would, address this in the story. And I would love it even more if Natty would actually smoke.

  4. Fur says:

    If the man she was with didn’t smoke then she won’t smoke and there are people who don’t smoke. I never even thought of this but you are right it was very common for that time. Personally I’m glad it’s not part of the story.

    What say you Ebo? (My thought is you didn’t think about it like me)

  5. Sarah-Sophie says:

    Hey Cassie,

    I don`t know Ebo`s reasons but I always guessed that Natty`s Love and Owner just didn`t like her smoking. So she had to stop. As a slave she was used to bending her wants and needs to her Love and Owner.
    Then there is also the fact that she was almost 50 years confined to her old bedroom. She couldn`t go out and she is also not able to think anything into existence. So even if she didn`t quit before that should have been long enough to quit.

  6. Nathan says:

    Hey Ebo, first, let me thank you for leading me, in a roundabout way, to Sapphic Share. Loving the site.

    I’ve been thinking a lot about Blue from The Wild and I would like, with your permission, to maybe write a story featuring her with my idea about why she seems so intelligent. Needless to say I would run the finished item past you before I thought about posting it anywhere.

  7. ebo says:

    Sorry it took a minute to reply to this. Write whatever appeals to you. I’ll put it up on Loli Sapphism if you want- on the main site, if it fits the criteria, or in the ‘Something a Little Different’ section, if not.

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